Jogjakarta
when the semester break yesterday I, jirin, and tomy went on vacation to Jogjakarta.
there we stay at home sister tomy, we go there by train. we just picked up when he got there by tommy sister to her house the next day after we arrived and had time to rest, we headed next malioboro and bought some souvenirs, then we visited a museum that is not far from Malioboro whatever name I forget, and we had their pictures taken together.
there we stay at home sister tomy, we go there by train. we just picked up when he got there by tommy sister to her house the next day after we arrived and had time to rest, we headed next malioboro and bought some souvenirs, then we visited a museum that is not far from Malioboro whatever name I forget, and we had their pictures taken together.
we stay at home sister tommy. ought to...we stayed at tommy sister's homes. we go there... ought to we went there because it is pats right.. and whatever name i forget ought to wathever i am forget because forget is adjective so you muts use tobe after subject.
BalasHapus1. the punctuation not correct : there are many comma.
BalasHapusthe ex :after word to rest the punctuation should be (.) not(,)
2. You must used past tenses but why you used present tense
ex :"we go there by train"